Monday is launch day for my debut YA Fantasy, You Are Mine! In anticipation of this, I wanted to share the first paragraph with you today. Hope you enjoy, and have a fantastic weekend!
My blood will entice warlocks to ask for my hand in marriage, so of course Father wants it spilled.The sooner the magic within it is measured, the sooner he can sell me off. According to the laws of Chardonia, there’s no escaping it. For me that day has come.
What do you think of the first line/paragraph? Do you have any fun plans for the weekend?
I’m spending my Saturday disconnected to the internet, working on book #2. Yay for Saturdays!
Janeal Falor 
6 replies on “First Paragraph of You Are Mine”
I LOVE your first line. It’s so powerful and made me read more. Such a great start to an awesome book:D Yay for Saturdays, that’s a great idea to be internet free.
Glad you found it powerful, and that you liked the book. And yes, love the internet, but turning it off once and a while is super helpful. 🙂
Wow, what an attention grabber! I can’t wait to start reading it tonight!! No fun plans this weekend, have a funeral Monday and lots of family stuff to deal w/all weekend. You’re book will be my escape.
Hope the family stuff goes smoothly for you, Liz. I’ll be thinking of you on Monday!
The first line is definitely intriguing! Love it but I love even more that you’re working on book #2!!! 😀
Thanks, Sabriena! So glad you’re excited for #2. I got a lot done it the last few days, wahoo. 😀